Is that correct or should it be over-whelming responses?

Some call it a brain fart but those in polite society would call it something much more demure and pleasant. A southern turn of phrase perhaps? All levels of editor will receive recognition on the Staff Page and links to their work or websites. Wow, talk about stream of consciousness.
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Anneliese:
We talk on the phone a lot, and talked a lot over the summer, sometimes even for hours at a time, however when we returned to school this year I found out that he got a girlfriend over the summer.
(12 October 2016)

Anneliese:
So last year I developed a crush on him and didn't tell anyone, and near the end of the year I found out that he likes me back, however Nothing came from this because I'm not allowed to date.
(12 October 2016)

Anneliese:
He's part of my friend group which consist of him and another guy, and myself and another girl, however he is really popular and gets along with almost everyone, just like me.
(12 October 2016)

Anneliese:
We almost instantly became friends and have been friends for a year and a half.
(12 October 2016)

Anneliese:
So my friend(let's call him jack) moved to our school last year during the 7th grade.
(12 October 2016)

Anneliese:
So I really like one of my friends, but idk if he likes me back.
(12 October 2016)

Toshiko:
His friends tease me bc i like my crush & i feel humiliated. I figured he doesn't like me bc of that. But why does he still stares at me?
(12 October 2016)

Toshiko:
Obviously if you don't like someone, you wouldn't pay attention to them at all.
(12 October 2016)

Toshiko:
I feel so humiliated, i feel so stupid for even liking him.
(12 October 2016)

Toshiko:
I realized how immature his friends are.
(12 October 2016)